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El Sol

by Joe Cramer

the sun feels so warm
so warm now upon my face
time does not erase

10/10/2011

Author's Note: ... it was going to be longer, but ended up being a haiku....

Posted on 10/10/2011
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/11/11 at 12:12 AM

It's so funny when a poem does that...:) I find "warm" to be one of those words, like "love", that has a million different meanings!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/11/11 at 04:18 AM

sometimes we can say a lot in 17 syllables:)

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