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Paradise City

by Gilly Wigley

I want to take a walk,
a stroll down Drury lane,
in the heart of paradise city.

Where crime life is nevermore.
nobody creeping door to door,
selling promiscous sex,
and chocolate bars,
raffle tickets
"win a car!"

Where blue skies are hazel,
and nothings comercial.
everything verbal
is verbally sound.
I've found
my place.
my place
in paradise city.

10/06/2011

Posted on 10/06/2011
Copyright © 2024 Gilly Wigley

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 10/10/11 at 02:00 AM

This is an intricate vision, Gilly. It contains just enough pieces to tell the story yet leaves the readers imagination to complete the poetic puzzle.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/12/11 at 01:04 PM

congrats on POTD...

Posted by Mo Couts on 10/13/11 at 12:59 AM

Congrats on your poem of the day, Gilly!

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