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If I were a commercial...

by Gilly Wigley

if i were a commercial i would advertise...

a love song in f minor
sung out of tune
breathy voice
cheesy choice
fumbling fingers
stumbling strings
E, A, D, missing G, B, E
skipping C# and D
dropping words two and three
awkward silence
clearing throats
lipless kissing
porch lit dim
all packaged up
in one tongue tied
twist tied
bottle of gin


Posted on 10/06/2011
Copyright © 2022 Gilly Wigley

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/10/11 at 04:39 PM

..... nice.....

Posted by Steve Michaels on 04/29/13 at 04:16 PM

It's a fun read and congrats on POTD!

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