It is the wondering
by Julie Adams
it gets me every time;
my pulse warms up
ideas swarm round
and I've found
it is the wondering that leads
to the crossroads,
in our hyper-conjunctive
but we are nothing
if we are not connected;
our humanity is
Posted on 09/25/2011
Copyright © 2021 Julie Adams
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/25/11 at 06:43 AM|
Sometimes I think our salvation is also our undoing. I love the route this poem uses to get to me.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 09/25/11 at 01:14 PM|
Some of us never see a different direction. Always the same route to work or home, always the same thing ordered in the same restaurant, etc. Nice write lady.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/26/11 at 01:02 AM|
... brilliant.... simply brilliant.....
|Posted by Mo Couts on 09/28/11 at 05:14 PM|
This is brilliant and wise. I always try to use my humanity but a good reminder, such as this, never hurts.
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/29/11 at 04:05 PM|
...uhh, ahh very cool, to the nth.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 10/02/11 at 01:32 PM|
It is the wandering of this piece that leads me to salivation as lines intersect to positive effect
makes me want to be saved :>
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/15/21 at 12:16 AM|
LOved this piece great choice for POTD!