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It is the wondering
by Julie Adamsit gets me every time;
my pulse warms up
ideas swarm round
and I've found
it is the wondering that leads
to the crossroads,
every junction
in our hyper-conjunctive
living
but we are nothing
if we are not connected;
our humanity is
our salvation 09/25/2011 Posted on 09/25/2011
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/25/11 at 06:43 AM Sometimes I think our salvation is also our undoing. I love the route this poem uses to get to me. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/25/11 at 01:14 PM Some of us never see a different direction. Always the same route to work or home, always the same thing ordered in the same restaurant, etc. Nice write lady. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/26/11 at 01:02 AM ... brilliant.... simply brilliant..... |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 09/28/11 at 05:14 PM This is brilliant and wise. I always try to use my humanity but a good reminder, such as this, never hurts. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/29/11 at 04:05 PM ...uhh, ahh very cool, to the nth. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/02/11 at 01:32 PM It is the wandering of this piece that leads me to salivation as lines intersect to positive effect
makes me want to be saved :> |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/15/21 at 12:16 AM LOved this piece great choice for POTD! |
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