September 17 by Meghan HelmichI envy you
those doe eyes that pretend
to want nothing
when I know that you plan to take it all
And poison anyone with an open glass. 09/23/2011 Posted on 09/23/2011 Copyright © 2025 Meghan Helmich
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Posted by Ava Blu on 09/23/11 at 05:44 PM I've seen eyes like these. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/23/11 at 07:30 PM Those eyes have gotten me in trouble on a couple of occasions. I'm a sucker for them. The confidence of voice in this is staggering. |
Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 09/29/11 at 07:48 PM YESSSSSS...cutting like a cheese knife at a french buffet. sometimes i thrive on this stuff. just edgy and brutal...well done, short but punchy like i like my women. |
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