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Unnoticed

by Richard Vince

He smiled, basking in the glow of
The highlight of his day. For him,
The Sun rose at quarter past seven
This evening.

She was oblivious, frowning to herself
For missing the early bus home.
Perhaps she would be smiling if
She had caught his bus instead.

05/25/2011

Posted on 09/18/2011
Copyright © 2024 Richard Vince

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/18/11 at 09:47 PM

I love the open book of that last stanza. A good write.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 09/18/11 at 10:15 PM

Ooh - I so want more of the 'story' :)

Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/19/11 at 10:39 PM

Wonderful, Richard.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 09/20/11 at 05:25 PM

Nice!!! (-: MFS

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