Sea of divers search for me a ship remains beneath the leagues. Infant brave a mothers trait swims silently through murky haze. Captain Reeves commands the crew look under rocks breathing or not. The baby finds me almost gone harpoon in chest octopus scars. The rescue efforts what a waste we're floating here beneath the waves. The symetry of old and new as wrinkles strecth I come unglued. Harpsicords and golden harps play for us a mermaids march. Married now with inner self pop the tanks I give my breath
09/13/2011
Posted on 09/13/2011Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson
You got me.
I wish I had even a tenth of the understanding of poetry that you do, and then be able to turn it into something as good as this. Well played, sir.
Nice use of metaphor and meter! Well done...