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by Shonda Creemer

this was our perfect day

soft, Fall sunshine
breeze against our cheek

staring at the clouds

Is that the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man?

i would reach for your hand,
but you are already holding mine

i want to bundle you up
with a paperclip
attach you to this moment

and mark you

to do

09/05/2011

Author's Note: i miss you

Posted on 09/05/2011
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/05/11 at 05:08 PM

...shonda, this is short yet so sweet mmmm. 'attach you to this moment' (too cool!)

Posted by Linda Fuller on 09/05/11 at 06:13 PM

Agree with Charlie...love the last five lines. You have a way with these shorties.

Posted by Mo Couts on 09/06/11 at 08:00 AM

This is charming and perfectly lovely, Shondy!

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