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dandelions

by Jared Fladeland

The tree cracks open,

and inside is a flower.

Her face is the petals,

her mind the stem.

And the constellations are her eyes,

always watching from above.

09/01/2011

Posted on 09/01/2011
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Samiah Haque on 09/02/11 at 05:55 AM

stunning. so visual, so beautiful and symphonic.

Posted by Mo Couts on 09/02/11 at 09:32 AM

Dittoing Samiah wholeheartedly and completely.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/11/11 at 09:30 PM

An image captured flawlessly.

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