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First collaborative poem
by Paganini JonesI haven't been able to find anyone to collaborate with me for the competition (I admit to not trying terribly hard though) but today I talked to our granddaughter age 6 and 3/4 about words that 'sound like' i.e. rhyme. When we went shopping we made up rhymes as we walked and came up with this:
Hello Freddy.
Are you ready?
No I'm not.
It's too hot.
I want soup.
I like gloup-
-y
pea
(not too shabby,
is it, Abbi?) 08/19/2011 Posted on 08/19/2011
Copyright © 2024 Paganini Jones
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 08/19/11 at 04:17 PM Very cute! It so fun to write with the little people. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 08/19/11 at 06:52 PM this is wonderful.You and your granddaughter make a great team! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/19/11 at 06:53 PM ...not shabby at all, more to the point is/was the moments of your two minds whirling(her 6 and 3/4 churning through a dictionary's pages...i wanna pocket those moments. delightful pome out of the trip. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 08/19/11 at 09:46 PM hehe, adorableness!! |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 08/23/11 at 09:23 PM cute |
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