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my last breath (Basho rewrite)

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

my last breath
breeze on the moors
stirring dreams


Author's Note: This is a rewrite of a Basho haiku:

Sick on my journey,
only my dreams will wander
these desolate moors

Posted on 08/17/2011
Copyright © 2021 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/20/11 at 08:11 PM

...basho grins, as do i.

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