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HelloGoodbye
by Monique Louwdon't reach for me i cannot See
my soul is blind and heart unKind
seek solace elsewhere
please reach for Me.
who knows what oneyouandme can be...
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you don't reach for me you cannot See
your soul is blind and your heart unKind
I seek solace elsewhere
don't reach for Me
I care nothing for the (N)oneYouandMe
08/07/2011 Author's Note: Sometimes, unrequited love should stay that way.
Posted on 08/07/2011
Copyright © 2025 Monique Louw
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 08/07/11 at 08:47 PM i like the presentation...very good! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/07/11 at 09:48 PM Some great creativity in the style, and some good writing to go behind it. Nice. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 08/08/11 at 01:56 PM I absolutely agree with your author's note and for me, it made the poem. Awesomely done and intriguingly presented. |
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