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WHEN A PERSON LIKE THAT DIES

by W. Mahlon Purdin

Some people just captivate.
We stare at them with wide-open awe.
Their words are words we've heard before
But never with that emotion, that intensity
That tear-duct searing rip out
That leaves us breathless with shock
And fear and wonder and that craving
For more and more and more.

Like poets aflame
They transcend and bring us
A world so suddenly real:
A glimpse into how things really are,
That with their each straining effort
We feel our eking lives passing
Too fast, too slow, too feebly.
We know we are wasting every moment
Without such feeling, without such zeal,
Without such hopelessness and such fear;
Without such love and such emptiness.
Without such truth.

When a person like that dies, it's no wonder.
How could they keep living
Among our compromises and our lies?
How could one so true
Who gave it all to us,
Who drained everything out
To the last refrain, do anything else?

When a person like that dies, it's no wonder.
It leaves an emptiness
Like a word we can't remember,
A lost train of thought.
It leaves us drifting in its crater.
We want to fill it, but it
Just stays empty.

Like a tune we can't forget
But will never be able to sing;
When a person like that dies,
It's the death of everything.

[For Amy Winehouse. 1983-2011.]

07/29/2011

Posted on 07/29/2011
Copyright © 2026 W. Mahlon Purdin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/29/11 at 03:32 PM

Wonderful, beautiful poetic rhythm. Absolutely heartbreaking.

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/29/11 at 06:07 PM

Heartbreaking and beautiful...all at the same time. Wonderfully done.

Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 07/31/11 at 01:45 PM

A beautiful tribute to a lost soul.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/31/11 at 06:23 PM

"...We feel our eking lives passing too fast, too slow, too feebly..." - this line particularly impacted me...within the 2nd moving stanza, within the poem as a whole - a wonderful tribute to a tortured artist, who will be missed.

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