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Excruciating Bliss

by Jody Pratt

If I implied a kiss,
would you apply
a hurling forward fist?

For without your kiss,
my lips no doubt
will sink into abyss.

I try to sneak a kiss,
you turn a cheek
and shamefully I miss.


What is this?


I'm surprised with a kiss,
perfectly implied
it binds my wrists.

I claim your kiss,
finally obtained
I'll be sure to savor this.

Your invigorating kiss,
inevitably initiates
excruciating bliss.

07/21/2011

Author's Note: I actually wrote this sometime last year, not sure when though.

Posted on 07/22/2011
Copyright © 2024 Jody Pratt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/22/11 at 02:44 PM

Nicely done structure and word play. A lot of fun.

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/23/11 at 12:24 AM

Awesome :)

Posted by John Stevens on 09/03/11 at 12:15 PM

Good read Jody

Posted by Lori Blair on 01/05/12 at 07:59 PM

Excellent..made me smile..so glad I read this! :)

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