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For the Girl Who Caught My Eye pt. 2
by Kate ZimmermanYou define beauty
Beauty is defined by you
Have you noticed?
Have you seen?
I'm beginning to think
You are everything I need
That scares me
But I do believe
In love at first sight
Or not at all
But the way it feels
As summer gives in to fall
Because you are autumn
A glorious redemption
Of a colorful death
Of leaves 09/28/2010 Posted on 07/08/2011
Copyright © 2025 Kate Zimmerman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/08/11 at 10:56 PM Oh wow, Kate. You're speaking, er, writing, the words right from my soul; thank you for knowing. Wow, this is just fabulously done. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/08/11 at 11:45 PM ... wonderful..... |
| Posted by Timothy Wilson on 07/09/11 at 05:11 AM Just beautiful. you write like an old soul, and show much maturity and discipline in your works. This was just beautiful, again. |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 12/30/11 at 02:55 PM I sense you have a kindred spirit for the paradox. I like the way your imagery contains the opposite feelings of seasons and emotions...I like that decay to give way thing. You have it perfectly put for me in the last part of this. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 12/30/11 at 03:03 PM This is so sweet. I love it. Absolutely love it! ~N |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 12/30/11 at 09:48 PM wow. that's lovely. :) a very deserving POTD. :) |
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