A Friday Night by Rebecca BowenHopin' bars,
Kicked cars,
lots of cards,
Let's see the flop.
Pissed off guys
Fucked up rides,
Drunk men fight.
No more drinking tonight.
Passed out guys,
People getting high,
Don't you love my life?
07/02/2010 Author's Note: Ok, people arent understanding this one, so I think it's about time to explain it. This is a fun life for me now, but when I wrote this it was more of a sarcastic thing, and the last line is a retorical question because I was so fed up with the going ons of the people around me, but now it's different, I wrote this a few years ago and between that time I made a transiton from middle school to highschool, just that one jump makes alot of difference.
Posted on 07/02/2011 Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Bowen
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Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 08:40 PM Fast paced, good beat, nicely done! |
Posted by Wayne Tate on 07/08/11 at 04:08 AM Used to be a typical week for me. I completely relate. I loved this. Thanks for sharing. |
Posted by Timothy Wilson on 07/13/11 at 03:09 PM that truly IS the life.... nice poem |
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