| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 06/16/11 at 04:49 PM Well crafted, with a strong ending. Welcome aboard Amy! |
| Posted by Kimberly Bauer on 06/16/11 at 06:53 PM unimportant till it isn't.. has been my very thought of life lately. well done and welcome! |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 06/22/11 at 06:30 PM Very dynamic, I am in your Library reading and I appreciate that many of your works say much with few words. Write On! |
| Posted by Samiah Haque on 07/23/11 at 01:42 AM i love how you point out how common a name is--it is the first thing one learns upon meeting someone, but it is sacred and important. i always felt a name was like a box, collecting things or a weapon or sometimes your entire you. this was a wonderful poem. strong and touching |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/11/11 at 10:44 AM Comparisons stalked by contrasts -- your name is becoming a symbol of poetic intrigue for this attentive reader... |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 11/12/22 at 09:31 PM a most deserving POTD. satisfyingly clever. :) |
