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drenched

by Angela Thomas

i've only ever laid eyes on him twice,
strangers playing lovers in the night
on a platform. his hands slid directly
into mine and i felt it like you feel

the train move under you leaving
the station. subtle, but you know
it's no longer in the same place
it used to be. he called on a bad

day to talk. i consoled. tried
to cheer him up. he asked,
'does it ever rain in your world?'
pours. buckets and buckets

and i shovel and shovel until the earth
appears bare again, dry, without the rain.

06/02/2011

Author's Note: sometimes i love and sometimes i hate the technology. i just can't seem to get this man off my mind. no good reason.

Posted on 06/02/2011
Copyright © 2025 Angela Thomas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/23/11 at 03:19 PM

Reminds me of "South Pacific", the song, "Im gonna wash that man right out of my hair..."!

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