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i'm moving

by Charlie Morgan

i wrote and rewrote this poem
until i finally got it right.

you would've loved it. but, i
was too proud to show it. too

caring; it would hurt any poet
to read how good i am and how
poorly they are. alas, i feel
their pain, perhaps i'll move.

05/19/2011

Posted on 05/19/2011
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/19/11 at 04:09 PM

Stay! Stay! And be honest (with me) even if it's brutal!

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/19/11 at 10:34 PM

LOL..Please don't leave Charlie til we've all climbed the pinnacle which you now alone occupy. I tell you, the journey itself will be worth the price of the ride!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/19/11 at 11:11 PM

Ha. Great wit, sir.

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