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i'm moving by Charlie Morgani wrote and rewrote this poem
until i finally got it right.
you would've loved it. but, i
was too proud to show it. too
caring; it would hurt any poet
to read how good i am and how
poorly they are. alas, i feel
their pain, perhaps i'll move. 05/19/2011 Posted on 05/19/2011 Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/19/11 at 04:09 PM Stay! Stay! And be honest (with me) even if it's brutal! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/19/11 at 10:34 PM LOL..Please don't leave Charlie til we've all climbed the pinnacle which you now alone occupy. I tell you, the journey itself will be worth the price of the ride! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/19/11 at 11:11 PM Ha. Great wit, sir. |
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