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Freedom
by Matt OdellToday I lit my hopes on fire
and tossed their ashes into the breeze.
I'll let the wind carry them to a far off distant place.
I've held on to them for too long,
its time to set them free.
They played heavy on my heart strings,
a game of jenga by rail to the highest mountain in North America.
and though they will not be forgotten,
In their freedom may I too take flight.
Its time I just believed,
for hope can give you the desire to
but hopes themselves are empty
wilting flowers that only thirst for commitment. 05/02/2011 Author's Note: Today was one of the most beautiful days I've had all year. Yet, I still long for something I can't control. May this poem represent me letting loose and just living like I need to.
Posted on 05/03/2011
Copyright © 2026 Matt Odell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/03/11 at 04:17 PM Well done Matt! I know where you are coming from in your Author's Notes. We all tread those emotions in the byways of our lives and loves! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/15/11 at 09:42 PM excellently conveyed message here! congrats on potd! |
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