untitled (26) by Brynn Dizack
what an impossible sound:
our collective death.
seaglass gray, or
milky-white, your
limbs in the dark,
(mottled with the
blue-black of contact)
most nights i
put my hands on you
until you can no longer speak,,
until all your sounds are buried
in the snowdrifts of your breathing.
oh,, in
these surefooted days without water,
i am quiet,,
quieter than sleep,
or snow,
or the anticipation of failure--
04/29/2011 Posted on 04/29/2011 Copyright © 2024 Brynn Dizack
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/29/11 at 10:52 PM That ending has such a beautiful, haunting refrain to it. Loved the whole thing. |
Posted by Anita Mac on 05/04/11 at 11:39 PM I am w/ Gabe. The ending is so perfect for the piece as a whole-- and what a whole! Breathtaking, little bird. |
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