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erecting a poem
by Charlie Morganwhen you read my pome, was it alright?
did i space the lines just right?
how about words: did i use enough?
were they the right ones? le seul mot juste?,
you know, the just right word?
did i need to change anything? was it alright?
i mean, did i say what i wanted to say, you know
do you, well, you understand, don't you? why i
would say that word instead of the other one?
you know, right? the other folks may have some say.
so i'll ask. 04/28/2011 Posted on 04/28/2011
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/28/11 at 05:42 PM again with the sexual words...also...you read like Taylor Mali in this a bit...playful and fun. Chaz at his finest. ~JPP |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/28/11 at 06:48 PM Damn clever, sir. I got a great kick out of this. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/29/11 at 12:30 AM Charlie Morgan pomes....
...are just right
if the right reader reads...right? |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/29/11 at 09:41 PM Chaz, your poem touched my tickle bone. I got a laugh out of your words. It flows so well. I like the language you used and just a touch of French. Touche! ~Chelle~ |
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