|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/11 at 03:24 PM|
The flow in this is really, really nice. I can hear this very clearly as a strong, succinct spoken-word piece.
|Posted by Mike Loftis on 04/28/11 at 01:52 AM|
|Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 04/29/11 at 12:28 AM|
1000 x YES!
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/03/11 at 04:12 AM|
You've presented some excellent paradoxes here. Excellent verse. ~Chelle~
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/05/11 at 12:02 AM|
I agree with Gabriel. The allaiteration alone makes this a pleasan tpiece to speak aloud. Then there is the philosophical stances. Very good!
|Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 02/15/18 at 05:02 AM|
Wow. I am really thankful to have stumbled upon your writing. It's been so long since I was a frequent flyer here, and it's nice to start dipping in again and come across really good stuff like this. I really like this style.