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Sweet Savory Sunburns by Matt OdellThe doctor said
I have freckles on my heart.
They're not fatal,
but he's curious as to how
I got them
Apparently,
he's never see you smile.
I have
and I've never felt so warm.
Do they make sunscreen for your heart?
cause when these clouds part,
I want to be there.
I just don't want to get a sunburn.
The doctor says I'm too pale.
But, I'll be allright.
I tan quickly.
I just need to see you smile again. 04/11/2011 Posted on 04/12/2011 Copyright © 2026 Matt Odell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/12/11 at 09:50 PM Nice shot of story. I liked it. |
| Posted by Ymelda Ramirez on 04/15/11 at 05:21 PM Added to my favs, me likey! =) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/18/11 at 01:07 AM ... exceptional! Welcome to Pathetic..... |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/20/11 at 06:58 PM ...clang! the cymbals clash[signaling the close of Acti 1; like the bumpdadump if this. |
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