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Maybe its the smoke
by Matt OdellI sit
fire ablaze
in moment so savory
that dinner tastes
like dessert
and I
feel like a kid
again
Maybe its the smoke
the smokey smell
left on my jacket
from a fire of a
memory
only wilderness
like this
can ignite 04/12/2011 Posted on 04/12/2011
Copyright © 2026 Matt Odell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/12/11 at 10:12 AM ...cool, matt. the twineing of the concepts is delightful. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 04/13/11 at 10:31 PM "only wilderness
like this
can ignite" - great line. Welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Ymelda Ramirez on 04/15/11 at 05:19 PM I really enjoyed this.
"dinner taste like dessert"
Wow!! Can't wait to read more. Welcome! =) |
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