In the Margins by Anita MacI crave forward compliments
from someone who will
let me move him in earnest.
… They used to flow from your mouth
like a casually bleeding heart.
04/06/2011 Posted on 04/06/2011 Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/06/11 at 03:39 PM Do I ever love the hell out of that last line. What a great way to put it. |
Posted by Julie Adams on 04/06/11 at 08:13 PM Gorgeous, in thought and imagery. Nice work! Peace, jewels |
Posted by Ava Blu on 04/12/11 at 11:04 PM I've said this before: I love when people can take a few lines and say SO VERY MUCH. Only a few people can do this well; you're one of them. |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/23/11 at 06:26 AM amazing! what else can i say? |
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