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In the Margins

by Anita Mac

I crave forward compliments
from someone who will
let me move him in earnest.

… They used to flow from your mouth
like a casually bleeding heart.

04/06/2011

Posted on 04/06/2011
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/06/11 at 03:39 PM

Do I ever love the hell out of that last line. What a great way to put it.

Posted by Julie Adams on 04/06/11 at 08:13 PM

Gorgeous, in thought and imagery. Nice work! Peace, jewels

Posted by Ava Blu on 04/12/11 at 11:04 PM

I've said this before: I love when people can take a few lines and say SO VERY MUCH. Only a few people can do this well; you're one of them.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/23/11 at 06:26 AM

amazing! what else can i say?

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