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what?

by Bryan Poole

You words
Like arrows
Pierce my chest

The thought
that I would
do those things

Hurts me
as you speak
Terrible thoughts

04/04/2011

Author's Note: I'm sort of experimenting with different modes. I like the separate paragraphs, normally with 12 lines in each. But this seems to work.

Posted on 04/05/2011
Copyright © 2025 Bryan Poole

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/05/11 at 02:26 PM

I'm really into the simple honesty and plain-speakingness of your writing.

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