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Shurio

by Ben Evans

Cackle-mouthed and lying open
snaggle-toothed and fighting sharp
shut right off from all sensation
watch me lie here in the dark

enjoy the silence held together
by long drawn pauses held up tight
and now I really don't know whether
God is dead or I've lost sight

04/03/2011

Posted on 04/02/2011
Copyright © 2026 Ben Evans

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/03/11 at 01:43 AM

...ahhh gulp! somber, surrealistic; you make him/you so visual...cool writing.

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