| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 04/04/11 at 10:02 PM I had that same headache last week but mine was lacking in poetry. I have missed your wonderful expressive beauty in words. smh |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/07/11 at 12:35 PM What amazes me is how this poem evolved from but a line, a snippet...awesome, beautiful work..but what else is new from your pen, poetess? |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/07/11 at 07:12 PM I love the descriptions....such a pleasant read. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/08/11 at 11:17 PM "when un-nurtured it cannot thrive" ~ how true.
You've created a healing Mariaism from a one of those delightful JDisms! Totally cool :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/09/11 at 05:23 PM Does this fit with dry heaves which I am having!
A headache by anyother name still rankles!
A most interesting take off on a jadiism. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/14/11 at 01:25 AM What I like most about this protracted thought is the process in which it transforms. It moves from possibility, to reality, to vision, to spiritual, to ethereal, and ultimately back from space with poetic flare that only m.a can deliver. I know you’re going to say it was my words that inspired you but inspiration being what it is, you are truly the source. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/18/11 at 03:53 PM Wonderfully written. Congrats on POTD Maria. |
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