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Could You, Would You?

by Alisa Js

could you love me
I mean, really love completely
with everything we know now,
at this place
with these hearts.
would we
find that fire we so often speak of
dream about
and desire more than anything
next to life itself

would you saunter into my world
and stay awhile
taste the ecstasy
anticipating
or
would you return
to yours,
so familiar
and yet, so lonely
without me...

03/24/2011

Posted on 03/24/2011
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/25/11 at 08:16 PM

I love that ending. The tone in this is perfect.

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