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fashioning a noose

by Angela Thomas

i found out today that my friend killed
himself. strung a rope around his neck
and let the weight pull the stress off
his back. i can't quite comprehend

how a father, a brother, a son, a friend
could actually go through with it. life
is full of terrible times, dark and cold
waters with no hope for redemption

or a way out unscathed. fraught
with fights, pain, mistakes, tears,
wringing hands, and words we wished
we had said, sometimes it seems easy

to swing. easy to let go, stop fighting.
today i lost a friend to a quiet kinda
defeat. one that is only suffered alone
and can only be ended that way too.

03/16/2011

Author's Note: rest peacefully will

Posted on 03/17/2011
Copyright © 2024 Angela Thomas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/18/11 at 09:29 PM

Harrowing and brutally tragic. This is a tough read, but a beautifully written one nonetheless.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/26/11 at 08:06 PM

...angela, you really got/get me with this one; i am touched by you being so touched by will; so well expressed, i breathing slowly.

Posted by George Hoerner on 12/18/11 at 03:38 AM

Beside myself I've only known one other person directly to have commited suicide. Some of live a life of suicide that none see until we finalize the act. I do enjoy your expression. Good write lady.

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