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i threw something and it stuck
by Frankie SanchezI've never seen the wrong side of _____*
I'm a random boy on the internet's cover of Maynard James Keenan's cover of Elton John's Rocket Man.
I'm sky-lit, universe-as-a-backdrop,
in flight, open like a parachute,
eyes wide like backwards telescopes,
if you're there when I land I'm gonna hold you like the sky
holds everything. 03/07/2011 Author's Note: *[in-ter-ak-tiv] this is an excerpt from a poem I've been working on. (i'm a chemist of sorts) now if you'd like you could help me by filling in that blank with your idea.
Posted on 03/08/2011
Copyright © 2024 Frankie Sanchez
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 03/08/11 at 03:18 AM Oh my. Maynard?! Love. Killer ending. Love everything about this. "I've never seen the wrong side of my future." |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 03/08/11 at 05:37 PM I like the blank. everyone can fill in what ever their mind tells them. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 03/11/11 at 10:12 PM ...a mobius strip. This looks to be the start (or midsection) of another sterling effort - look forward to seeing the finished work. |
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