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reflecting [02-23-11]

by Ava Blu



there are people who keep everything, placing a dying flower in-between the pages of their favorite book.
i found things buried in my grandmother's bible once; a torn letter, the serenity prayer, a picture of her husband and one little dead yellow rose.
i wish i had something concrete to reflect upon, something buried within but i use my words to hide messages so everyone who needs to read them never do.


02/23/2011

Author's Note:

(including me)

Posted on 02/24/2011
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/24/11 at 04:33 PM

this feels so lonely. though it is written beautifully.

Posted by Julie Adams on 02/25/11 at 04:12 AM

there is so much you say, even when concealing, that seeps in to a reader...what a satisfying sandwich of a poem, no matter the layers, no matter who sees or doesn't. A pleasure to read u again...u inspire me with every read xoxox

Posted by Anita Mac on 02/27/11 at 01:51 AM

I wish I was one of those people who's good at keeping things... But I always end up purging myself of my belongings out of annoyance. It makes me pretty sad after the fact, which is the exact same sort of isolation I feel in this.

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