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little hypnotists

by Desdemona Sinestra

tiny fingers plug our thoughts 
like pins to balloons
pretenderendering
tiny fingers with pointy claws sink
inside our overripe faces
all but eyes and words shrinking
 clout clout clout clout
smaller and smaller and smaller
inside out and void of doubt

02/22/2011

Posted on 02/23/2011
Copyright © 2024 Desdemona Sinestra

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/23/11 at 03:18 PM

Stunning. The language in this is just vicious to the letter, and that's definitely a good thing.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/23/11 at 10:19 PM

"tiny fingers with pointy claws sink
inside our overripe faces" love these lines! the rest of the piece is pretty awesome too!

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