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As It Will
by Joe CramerTwilights coolness comes on
flowing through night's breaking dawn.
As the sun slips into this land,
there is little left to chance, to plan.
Shivering grayly the clouds dance away
within this slowly breaking day.
And yet, the coolness remains still
lingering on in this dawn, as it will. 02/20/2011 Posted on 02/20/2011
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/21/11 at 07:57 PM Beautiful imagery and flow. Excellent work! |
| Posted by Kimberly Bauer on 02/22/11 at 06:42 AM I love that the clouds are dancing. Such youthful mysterious things. Loved the poem. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/23/11 at 03:13 PM this brought me back to the cold winter mornings in anchorage, looking out as the sun comes up, just knowing despite how inviting it looks it's still only almost 10 degrees F. thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 02/24/11 at 06:34 PM A beautifully crafted image. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/26/11 at 12:03 AM Brilliant in simplicity. Superb content. Delightful author. A favorite. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/01/11 at 04:30 AM these two stanzas drift before you like clouds, I make images from their shapes, their sounds, their depth, thanks to ur poignant diction, what a posting I will treasure, instant fav, kudos, peace n poems, jewels |
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