They found a space between the snow banks where two creatures made their way and every click and scratch of denim teeth was silenced by the rain. Josh pulls the compass from the rubble and dusts away the heavy earth cos what's revealed here's not direction just a keepsake well deserved. There's a choppy tension brewing deep beneath her ocean floor that floods over through that fleshy cave only to wash up on his shores. The two entangled in the fever of a second-hand embrace dart their tongues like rabid serpents their brain stems drowning in the haze. Much praise to the detectives in their calm and quiet skin for the sights they found in solace left their demons in a cringe. The vibrant twigs and hollow oak trees hang so high and low below as their bodies left the atmosphere they left their spirits in the snow.
02/10/2011
I like the concept of "Choppy tension." This piece is full of great lines and ideas like that.
Nobody does it like you, Johnny. Thanks for another lovely stumble through the shadows.
This is a new favorite for me... I'm kicking myself for disappearing.