| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/07/11 at 12:55 PM ...Vince, i scrapped-off the cool pile and this ohe was on top. well-crafted. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/07/11 at 04:17 PM Nicely done Vince. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 02/07/11 at 11:47 PM Ah. I lovelovelove when poets make the words dance. Thank you. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 02/08/11 at 11:02 AM Monotypically expressive piece, if that doesn't sound too crotchety. Liquid notes that belie a concrete definition...
I'll sign the petition for the burying of gods :> |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/10/11 at 08:52 AM So thats what happens when (like in the head) a song gets stuck in the word processer...fun. Thanks. |
| Posted by Anne Di Baguette on 02/10/11 at 08:25 PM I thought I was a musician once, but that was long ago. This little piece is lovely...albeit sinister. Or maybe that's just me. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 02/27/11 at 01:36 AM There is something very you about this one... I like it, the cute form and dark words add up to a familiar snarky of which I'm quite fond. |
