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Your Name Meant Something In Polish

by Lori St. George

Your name meant something in Polish.
But I am not able to discern.
You were a weak casualty of the war,
Of what the drugs all burned.
Got only tomorrow's recollection
of the old days relearned.
I am too stark a corpse,
to be all taken in,
or taken aback by remorse.

The doctor should have warned me,
I exist only as cell activity.
I can't find,
Your touch that staked me
Got only an unstructured storyline
Retained from my neuron sea.
Where I drown all night,
Dangling your kite in my bone tree.
There was a song on the radio,
I should have felt it.
I can't understand it.
The scars where your teeth bit.
In some commemorative time
you were hell bent and sadly missed.
And my love went
where you went.
With all my time utterly spent,
I have nothing left
To show for it
Except a hospital bed
A heart of lead,
and something you said.
I think.

01/19/2011

Posted on 01/20/2011
Copyright © 2024 Lori St. George

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/11 at 09:58 PM

Great flow and language to this. The overall image that's in place by the end is so well defined.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/23/11 at 02:33 PM

i really really liked the ending. it really pulled it together for me. another great write.

Posted by E. A. Pugh on 05/30/11 at 04:09 PM

I just read this out loud and it was great to orate!

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