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#17 - formations of great beauty

by Linda Fuller

While the hygienist scraped tartar from his number two molar,
Jack pictured a spelunker scrubbing bat guano from the wall of a cave.
His number two molar was a stalactite, hanging tight to the ceiling
of the cave. Although there was only minimal light, apparently
emanating from luminescent fungi, Jack was able to see crystalline
formations of great beauty. He could barely make out the drip, drip, drip
of an underground spring. He felt a damp chill and reached to pull
his collar closer around his neck, but encountered instead a paper bib.
Jerked rudely back to his present reality, Jack opened his eyes
and found that his hygienist, formerly a reasonably attractive brunette,
had taken on the appearance of a blind white salamander.
Jack resolved then and there to take his dental business elsewhere.

01/17/2011

Author's Note: Poem-a-Day January 2011 #17

Posted on 01/18/2011
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/18/11 at 06:01 AM

LOL...a wonderful metaphor brought to a rather startling denouement...your voyage of poetry continues, Linda, and I think this is the best of the bunch, so far!

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