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by Joan Serratelli

I have a lot
going on
right now
in my life

I am fighting
a losing battle
with my mind

The LAST thing need
I need is for somebody
to have the ordasity
to tell me
what to write

POEMS write themselves
poems come from
the heart;
the soul

PLASE allow me
that ONE freedom

LIFE is hard enough
my poetry is just that
...MINE
it is the one thing
I do for myself

01/17/2011

Posted on 01/17/2011
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/17/11 at 07:26 PM

I admire your spunk!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/18/11 at 03:09 AM

...cool sentiment dear One.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/19/11 at 09:02 PM

I agree, to me at least, poetry - like love - implies a magical approach to life, quite different from the presently accepted rational way of looking at the world. That is, poetry brings out lifes little nuances. It delights in forming correspondences between events that seem quite seperate to the intellectually-tuned consciousness alone, and reveals undercurrents of usually-concealed actions that we quite ignore when we're most concerned about thinking rationally. Actually, that kind of vision contains its own spontaneous rationality, and often supplies us with answers more satisfying than purely intellectual ones. And yes, your poetry is yours, offered to others, no one is forcing!

Posted by Razel Davies on 02/07/11 at 04:59 PM

Through your poems i see your heart, it's beauty gives me a smile and it's pain brings me tears. anyone capable of feeling could not tell you not to write what you write.

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