feeling right by Carissa Dewey cold. Winter’s wind in this dark ally. the sliver of moon ahead. I stand let it chill my hair, my fingers, my legs. It burns, it numbs, in only moments. I’m thinking of you. How I left you, how I am thousands of miles away from you. This is new to me, this seriousness, this sudden change. The moon, a splinter. Jabs at me through the fierce wind. And just yesterday I had called you, hoping you would say the things to reel me back to you. And it’s only forgotten moments where I felt right. 01/09/2011 Posted on 01/10/2011 Copyright © 2024 Carissa Dewey Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Jim Benz on 01/10/11 at 03:13 AM this is extremely well-written. It "feels right" Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/10/11 at 03:48 PM The title certainly applies to the rest of this poem. Excellent work. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)