feeling right by Carissa Dewey cold. Winter’s wind in this dark ally. the sliver of moon ahead. I stand let it chill my hair, my fingers, my legs. It burns, it numbs, in only moments. I’m thinking of you. How I left you, how I am thousands of miles away from you. This is new to me, this seriousness, this sudden change. The moon, a splinter. Jabs at me through the fierce wind. And just yesterday I had called you, hoping you would say the things to reel me back to you. And it’s only forgotten moments where I felt right. 01/09/2011 Posted on 01/10/2011 Copyright © 2025 Carissa Dewey Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Jim Benz on 01/10/11 at 03:13 AM this is extremely well-written. It "feels right" Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/10/11 at 03:48 PM The title certainly applies to the rest of this poem. Excellent work. Return to the Previous Page     pathetic.org FAQ Members Poetry Center Login Signup   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)