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Comatose

by Stuart Shilton

One visit to the hospital
It smells like rotting death
Pressing all around you
You don’t feel anything
You don’t see the pain or feel the sorrow
You don’t feel anything
You don’t know we’re here
Comatose

01/07/2011

Posted on 01/07/2011
Copyright © 2024 Stuart Shilton

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/08/11 at 05:27 PM

The imagry works. I could see and smell the illness. It works.

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