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[12-25-10]
by Ava Blu
i am 40 lbs. lighter since you saw me;
my eyes are heavier now and they are adjusting
nicely without you.
i am not your baggage,
i am not sorry for the burdens you're carrying;
everything is better now that i subtracted you.
12/27/2010 Posted on 12/27/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JJ Johnson on 03/08/11 at 11:10 PM It seems as though you lost a lot more than 40 lbs. Makes me think less about a person than an addiction, but that's the beauty of poetry. Keep me guessing.... JJ |
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