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by Ava Blu



i am 40 lbs. lighter since you saw me; my eyes are heavier now and they are adjusting nicely without you.
i am not your baggage, i am not sorry for the burdens you're carrying;
everything is better now that i subtracted you.



12/27/2010

Posted on 12/27/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JJ Johnson on 03/08/11 at 11:10 PM

It seems as though you lost a lot more than 40 lbs. Makes me think less about a person than an addiction, but that's the beauty of poetry. Keep me guessing.... JJ

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