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Study Hours/Semester Credit by Johnny CrimsonThere were waves then,
we see the smallest parts of life,
remnants labeled with eye-liner expiration dates
and Colonel approved garrison hats litter the shore.
Able-bodied medicine Mothers
sprinkle the ash upon the dead
as if to say "Yes, you can grow smaller still."
The insignificant,
proud and thumping were their fists,
tempered in the steel of ovarian mindsets
with gravestone eyebrows, dipped in a manchurian milk of magnesia and brimstone.
Color us in rows,
the single filed ,linger piled aftermath,
of goArmy bar-maids with no clue as to what a Marine is capable of
on a first date.
Glitter and gather what evidence bleeds,
gather it beneath her lips that lye next to you
in your study.
The gentle whisps of pipe-smoke float through the evening fire,
and Watson will soon discover
that Holmes has been hiding girls in boxes
and solving his own murders. 12/20/2010
Posted on 12/21/2010 Copyright © 2025 Johnny Crimson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/21/10 at 04:42 PM This started out very dark to me then lightened to a gray. A gradient, if you will. I picture 50's esque guys and dolls in bars, and the beaches of Normandy. I love, the line about how us ladies don't know what Marines are capable of. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/21/10 at 09:16 PM Elementary indeed. Another ride through the disintegrating carnival. Brilliant. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 12/23/10 at 01:52 AM My mind went to the same place as Nanette's. I have to say, the descriptions in that 3rd stanza is fantastic... The words keeping going through my head seeming to unravel. |
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