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by Ava Blu



forgiveness is hanging upside down from your bottom lip and i have tasted the sweet remorse, i have witnessed a miracle in your stoned face
and i believe in us.

12/16/2010

Posted on 12/16/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/10/11 at 07:10 PM

i don't really know what it is about this one, maybe how short it is, maybe how it feels like a sharp punch to the gut, maybe it's just the language, but either way, amazing!

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