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Bird-watching

by Johnny Crimson

They left us beneath the waves
where the wolves do come,
and in this boisterous escape lye the
tiny embers of what once burned true.

Salivating, argyle-patterned-dropouts
line the coast for miles and days.
The feeble-eagle searchers with their soft framed spectacles
comb the beaches, still afraid of what lurks beneath the tide.

Carve me past truth and feeling,
carve until I forget my name in the green murk
where so much effort lay breathless.
This neon throat glistens in the rush
where never and nothing flirt with time.

I awoke buried in the sand,
her bathing suit scattered and torn around me.
Scanning the coastline I heard the seagulls call by the pier,
she hangs from there still.


12/13/2010

Posted on 12/13/2010
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/13/10 at 08:37 PM

I never know what to expect from your endings, and I'm never disappointed. This one shows even less mercy than usual.

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/13/10 at 10:42 PM

LOL... Sorry man, but like Gabe, I never know either, and that last stanza... well, the last line just struck me so funny. I'm sick. Very well written and that last stanza is a kick.

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 12/16/10 at 09:39 PM

I got a Hunter Thompson vibe from this, which I liked. It's very sincere without coming across as forced or sentimental.

Posted by Brynn Dizack on 12/21/10 at 07:36 AM

love.

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