Bird-watching by Johnny CrimsonThey left us beneath the waves
where the wolves do come,
and in this boisterous escape lye the
tiny embers of what once burned true.
Salivating, argyle-patterned-dropouts
line the coast for miles and days.
The feeble-eagle searchers with their soft framed spectacles
comb the beaches, still afraid of what lurks beneath the tide.
Carve me past truth and feeling,
carve until I forget my name in the green murk
where so much effort lay breathless.
This neon throat glistens in the rush
where never and nothing flirt with time.
I awoke buried in the sand,
her bathing suit scattered and torn around me.
Scanning the coastline I heard the seagulls call by the pier,
she hangs from there still.
12/13/2010
Posted on 12/13/2010 Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/13/10 at 08:37 PM I never know what to expect from your endings, and I'm never disappointed. This one shows even less mercy than usual. |
Posted by A. Paige White on 12/13/10 at 10:42 PM LOL... Sorry man, but like Gabe, I never know either, and that last stanza... well, the last line just struck me so funny. I'm sick. Very well written and that last stanza is a kick. |
Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 12/16/10 at 09:39 PM I got a Hunter Thompson vibe from this, which I liked. It's very sincere without coming across as forced or sentimental. |
Posted by Brynn Dizack on 12/21/10 at 07:36 AM love. |
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