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[12-3-10]

by Ava Blu




12/03/2010
Posted on 12/04/2010
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu


Member Comments on this Poem


Posted by Michael Smith on 12/04/10 at 05:15 AM
Great dichotomy.  Great form.  Your punctuation seems inconsistent.  Strong imagery. Evocative.  It startles us just like waking from a bad dream.  Well done.



Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/04/10 at 05:05 PM
Ava, I adore this one... really... it's awesome and then some!




















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