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yer Gloom by Johnny CrimsonI bet they write to you in August
when the heat becomes too real,
all those sloppy boys who bother you,
they're all just looking for a feel.
But it's never plain as day or easy jeans
no you're flirting with hard to get.
Hence why the moon appears almost every year,
she must owe you some great debt.
Yet with an overture of valences,
we're really balancing ourselves,
rocking back-and-forth on bloody tip-toes,
her image rots our brains to hell.
So with interest rates and glitter belts
always sticking to my mind,
I find that finding what I'm looking for,
is much easier when I'm blind.
I drive my car into your livingroom
just to watch you roll your eyes,
the same dead relatives fall off the staircase
and I still wonder why you try.
Let's stop pretending you're so satisfied
with your self-sufficient touch.
I'm always present beneath the floorboards dear,
I suppose I care too much.
So don't sliver up to me in closet space
or wink me to your room,
I'd soon rather be lost in space
than stuck inside your gloom. 12/02/2010
Posted on 12/02/2010 Copyright © 2025 Johnny Crimson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/02/10 at 04:11 PM It's that third to last stanza that I like the most. It's just one hell of a nicely-captured image. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/03/10 at 03:47 AM "I'm always present beneath the floorboards dear,
I suppose I care too much." I love these lines!
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| Posted by Anne Boulender on 12/03/10 at 06:25 AM i like the rhyme scheme of this. |
| Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 12/04/10 at 05:40 AM I am always extremely envious of poets that write in rhyme and pull it off. I myself cannot do this, and I'm not a particular fan of rhyming in any case. I also cannot tell you exactly which stanza I like the best. Everything is just a really tight package (haha pun intended). Nicely done! |
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