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family??

by Stuart Shilton


We don’t relate, we’re related but
Not in MIND
We live in the same house
But exist in separate universes
I am so much like you.

I see and understand only
To reject your reality
For an existence of my own
I’m sorry that
I am not as you are

11/27/2010

Posted on 11/28/2010
Copyright © 2024 Stuart Shilton

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 11/29/10 at 03:35 AM

. . . sounds like my Thanksgiving too! Nice work!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/29/10 at 04:15 AM

... well done... welcome to Pathetic.....

Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/29/10 at 08:59 AM

Nice message in a simple yet compelling poem. Nice job! Welcome to the site (I say that like I'm not a new member too ;)

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/08/11 at 05:17 PM

Did Those words come out of my mouth?Boy, can I relate. Wonderful write. Welcome to PPS. You'll fit in well.

Posted by P Cyban on 04/25/11 at 05:33 AM

Rings true for many of us. The second half is a well thought out way of saying something I've told myself many times.

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