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greetings,goodbyes
by Johnny CrimsonWhere the trees thicken
is where I'll find you,
covered in a milk left by the "clever" sea.
The ignorant tried and won,
they won.
Ripping the Target label off my "impress her" sweater,
I'm reminded that it's been 10 fuckin' years
and I'm still walking away,
dick in hand,not in her. 11/22/2010
Posted on 11/23/2010
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 11/29/10 at 06:00 PM I love that ending. I keep coming back to read this, I just never comment. I'm not good at commenting. |
| Posted by June Labyzon on 12/01/10 at 02:05 PM The last stanza makes me laugh outloud. I love the cynical. This is a cynicism at it's best. I too will come back to read this often and put it on my favorites list. |
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